Protected: Flash Fiction Friday: Story #2 September 7
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Filed under FFF Story by larisse | 3 comments
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bk_30 Sep 8
Well done
JVP Sep 8
Yay! Great job. I like the stuff you kept in
You have a nice voice.
The ‘voices of the dead’ thing is tough — I find it a little tough to follow, how she turned away from her ‘gift’ and yet still hears the voices, and how all of that relates to her hospital work. There might be a stronger ending somewhere, that ties her revelation about her grandmother and herself back into the struggle she was having (work, Bryce) at the beginning. But maybe it’s intentional — maybe she is going to stay in the mountains now?
CaySedai Sep 8
I enjoyed this – reading fast to see what came next. The only thing that jarred was the name of the grandmother – which is a brand name of something. I liked the way Rain regained her sense of identity.